#5 is typical of American teachers!
The essay is eloquently written. Its only problem is that it offends the teacher’s American puritanical sensibilities.Iused to co-mark with American teachers and their being offended by ‘rude’ or ‘inappropriate’ language was extremely common. You need to see past your puritanical prejudices, dudes. Seriously. It’sagreat essay and deserves at least an A-