this is f'ing hideous. one, hem your veil, if you're going to wear one made out of cheap organdy. it's going to fray like a motherfucker with a quickness.
two, do at least attempt to do something with your hair, sweetheart. you look like the day after prom, on no sleep and with an LSD hangover.
three, as a helpful tip from an actual anachronaut: someone is going to make fun of you if you're attempting to do this aristocratic thing while you're walking around with your 90s-fabulous electric teal bra strap hanging out.
four, and let's not forget that that dress looks about like what it probably cost.
five, that is quite possibly the ugliest, cheapest-looking, worst-fitting, and all-around most ghetto attempt at a corset i've ever seen in public.
six: i don't care what you've read on the internet, costume top hats are not elegant or interesting.
seven: surely the man realizes when a coat and pants are both too large for him. are you an aristocrat or is this your Bozo the Clown impression? good grief.
eight: calling this steampunk is an offense to steampunk. you can call a turd a diamond as much as you wish, but that doesn't make it so: and contrary to popular opinion, slapping the label/buzzword steampunk on a collection of cheapass, ugly crap doesn't mean people are going to fall all over themselves trying to give you money for it.

incorrect. in the 19th century, nobody would have left the house looking like this, and wearing a corset on the outside of your clothes would have gotten you arrested in short order. i know, i know, you were trying to be clever. don't quit your day job.