(1) *you’re, not your; (2) *or, not are; (3) the phrase in quotation marks should be separated by a semicolon between “boy” and “we”—otherwise it is a run-on sentence; (4) I’m and it’s (please review contractions and apostrophes); (5) acting has a g on the end of it; (6) ppl isn’t a real word erik73, if you’re one of those “this is America, we speak English” assholes (which, let’s fact it, you probably are), at least SPEAK ENGLISH. Fucking hypocrite.