This is odd. You got some stuff wrong. Most of it isn’t weird at all. But at least someone else reads Robert Darnton—or your professor is using him to teach. Off the top: The Great Cat Massacre had nothing to do with the French Revolution. Neither did the fertility problem (which was actually solved by Louis becoming a cuckold, but whatever.) Nor the daily bread consumption. Also: They’re called knee breeches—not britches, which is what grandparents refer to your pants as when you’re a little kid.